4/15

Today in Wester Civilization we talked about our essay and the mistakes we made. Mr. Schick explained many of the different grammar problems that he found in our papers. I know that I read over our paper and my partners did also. I had to make some changes to my parts and to fix some small grammar issues in my writing. I think I caught most of the issues I had. We were going to watch a video and have a discussion but we didn't have time.